Thursday, January 5, 2012

Journal 22

With my little blue mittens and sled
I went in search to find a hill
I felt my ears get cold and turn red
while I was still in search for the hill

It began to snow and ice
but still I searched for the perfect hill
My sled was red and was very nice
I went over the little hills

Calling out was mom in search of me
but all I could think was where was he
I looked all over and wonder where he could be
and pass the trees I finally found he

With excitement I ran to the top
I threw down my sled in a hurry
And I jumped aboard with a pop
I grasped the rope and held on for the journey

The rush of the wind hitting my face
I loved the feeling of the cold winter snow
I ended my run in a familiar place
And stood up and brushed off the snow

I picked up myself and headed home
My mom was waiting at the door
with a cup of cocoa with foam
and watch the snow fall for some more



3 comments:

  1. The poem had a nice rhythm and flowed nicely. You did a good job! Who is "he"?

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  2. This poem is awesome! You did a great job with your rhyming. You stayed on the same topic and the poem flowed very nicely! Good job!

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  3. Great job with this poem! It is very descriptive and has a nice rhythm, I also like the rhyming!!!!

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